Farewell

[ولائي لبني هاشم]

Hello everybody ..
How are you ??:)
I have a simple participation and I'd like to share it with you .
I wish you like it*D:* ..

goodbye for ever ..
i'll go and leave the bitter..
i'm going to look for the better ..
for a life without any bother ..
where love is welcomed by summer ..
and the feelings are hugged by winter .
i'll forget the past and never remember it never .. ..
and my soul refuses to carry its scrap in the future ..
just because I'm no longer care ..
since I believed it wasn't fair ..

Thanks for reading :)

[المنهل]

It is great that you have time to write a poem

easy language and and opened imagination

Coz you are expert, I will ask.(like I am studying the poem)

where love is welcomed by summer
and the feelings are hugged by winter

why summer not spring?
coz most poets find the spring as the most inspiring season to describe loves issues.

why winter?

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Connotations + (my Guess):
the summer is hot = love hotness
winter is cold and things shrink and getting hard = you used the winter to describe the closeness and the hardness of the cohesion in the feeling.

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best wishes and poems

[ولائي لبني هاشم]

Hello dear brother al manhal ..
first of all i'm so sorry for being late in replying , because i was very busy and you nearly know how busy i am ..
dear brother ..
it's really nice to see you here and i'm so grateful for reading my post .By the way i'm lower than to be an expert i don't think i deserve this title:eek:, anyway ...
you almost has reached my point but i'll say more things to make it clear for you and for the other readers who are interested in reading poems ..

there's no word in the world could explain the feelings of love , even if we write poems , they're still words on a paper which can't clarify the meanings of the real love.

poets always use spring to express the beauty of love and it's just as you said. From my point of view i can say , since spring is a great season and it forms all the meanings of beauty we can use it to show how love is wonderful and how pleasure it contains but spring can't describe the hotness of these feelings .

so , the hotness of love could be just explained by summer .
we can call it the season of embracing love .


Concerning the winter..
i've chosen this season because it's the season of warmness . The heat could be exist anywhere in order to have warm places . In my poem , winter stands as the person who has this warmness and he's ready to hug those tender feelings which are extremely thirsty and have the desire to be embraced by such warmness ..


sorry for talking a lot and thanks again for reading *D:*..

walai

[همسة قمر]

I dont think that you need a poor comment from me ! :(

Anyway , i liked your meaningfull poem becauseYou have perfectly chosen the words

very very nice and touchable words we have here
keep going posting such contributions and dont go far away !

I need yourcompanionship ! :)

I'm really proud of this debate between you and almahal .,7,



Wishing all your hopes to be realized - say inshallah :) -

[ولائي لبني هاشم]

dear sis Hamsa ..
i'm so glad for seeing you here , and i really appreciate your compliment on my post ..
by the way you're also a great poet , so you can write your own words here in order to share them with us .
thanks again for reading ..
god bless you .

[المنهل]

I 'm not finished yet, I still have something to say

first of all, I would like to thank sis Hamsa for her great efforts in this forum
I dont think that you need a poor comment from me !
Don't neglect you abilities, I'm sure you are very good at this. like sis walai said you are a poet and the poet is a special person has the inspiration, and he can do a lot with it.

Back to the poem:

By the way i'm lower than to be an expert i don't think i deserve this title,
if it is up to me I consider you as an expert.

there's no word in the world could explain the feelings of love , even if we write poems , they're still words on a paper which can't clarify the meanings of the real love.

I have to agree this.

poets always use spring to express the beauty of love and it's just as you said. From my point of view i can say , since spring is a great season and it forms all the meanings of beauty we can use it to show how love is wonderful and how pleasure it contains but spring can't describe the hotness of these feelings .

so , the hotness of love could be just explained by summer .
we can call it the season of embracing love .
this is a new connotation I have learnt, specially the words in red. I can see how useful this conversation or let us say this discussion.

Concerning the winter..
i've chosen this season because it's the season of warmness . The heat could be exist anywhere in order to have warm places . In my poem , winter stands as the person who has this warmness and he's ready to hug those tender feelings which are extremely thirsty and have the desire to be embraced by such warmness ..

Look!!
I can see clearly the connection between the two verses ( Just Now )
I misunderstood the winter completely.


sorry for talking a lot and thanks again for reading

Since it is useful discussion, you can talk as much as you want.
I really enjoyed this so keep it up.